
Answer: The rewritten version of the article is written below. Â This is in my own words.
Explanation: At 10:41 in the morning, two police detectives located two men that had entered a liquor mart in the Oak Hill Shopping Center at 1300 block of Oak Hill Avenue. Â The men looked and acted unusually as they entered the shopping center. Â When the detectives arrived at the mart to investigate the suspicious men, they noticed that while the other was robbing the clerk blind, one of the men was pointing a gun at the innocent clerk. Â The officers put a stop to the robbery by shooting the man with a gun. Â However, this wasn't the shopping center's first rodeo, as there have been seven other robberies taking place in the past month in the shopping center.
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